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Śrī Caitanya-caritāmṛta
[Ādi-līlā, Ch. 16]
SYNONYMS
avimṛṣṭa-vidheyāṁśa —unclean composition;  dui ṭhāñi —in two places;  cihna —symptoms;  viruddha-mati —a contradictory conception;  bhagna-krama —broken order;  punar-ātta —redundancy (also called  punar-ukti );  doṣa —faults;  tina —three.
TRANSLATION
“In this verse the fault of  avimṛṣṭa-vidheyāṁśa  occurs twice, and the faults of  viruddha-mati ,  bhagna-krama  and  punar-ātta  occur once each.
TEXT 56
‘গঙ্গার মহস্ত’—স্লোকে মূল ‘বিধেয়’। 
  ইদং শব্দে ‘অনুবাদ’—পাছে অবিধেয় ॥ ৫৬ ॥
‘gaṅgāra mahattva’—śloke mūla ‘vidheya’ 
  idaṁ śabde ‘anuvāda’—pāche avidheya
SYNONYMS
gaṅgāra mahattva —glorification of mother Ganges;  śloke —in the verse;  mūla —chief;  vidheya —unknown;  idam —this;  śabde —by the word;  anuvāda —the known;  pāche —at the end;  avidheya —improper.
TRANSLATION
“The glorification of the Ganges [mahattvaṁ gaṅgāyāḥ] is the principal unknown subject matter in this verse, and the known subject matter is indicated by the word idam, which has been placed after the unknown.
TEXT 57
‘বিধেয়’ আগে কহি’ পাছে কহিদে ‘অনুবাদ’। 
  এই দাগি’ স্লোকের অর্থ করিয়াছে বাঘ ॥ ৫৭ ॥
‘vidheya’ āge kahi’ pāche kahile ‘anuvāda’ 
  ei lāgi’ ślokera artha kariyāche bādha
SYNONYMS
vidheya —what is unknown;  āge —first;  kahi —after speaking;  pāche —at the end;  kahile —if one speaks;  anuvāda —known things;  ei lāgi —for this reason;  ślokera —of the verse;  artha —meaning;  kariyāche —has been made;  bādha —objectionable.
TRANSLATION
“Because you have placed the known subject at the end and that which is unknown at the beginning, the composition is faulty, and the meaning of the words has become doubtful.