Text 70} Pastimes of Childhood and Youth 235
TEXT 68
awry aS ACs BITE Ae TTT! |
OE ABCHITS CHT CM TAA 1 Oe |
yadyapi ei sioke Gche pafica alankara
ei pafica-dose Sloka kaila charakhara
SYNONYMS
yadyapi—although; e/ s/oke—in this verse; dche—there are; pafica—five; alankara—
literary embellishments; ef parica-dose—by the above-mentioned five faults; s/oka—
the verse; kaifa—has been made; charakhara—spoiled.
TRANSLATION
“Although there are five literary ornaments decorating this verse, the entire verse
has been spoiled by these five most faulty presentations.
TEXT 69
Hl BETTI A AH A Cols TTI
HE COTA AI SHS BF WI vd 1
dasa alanka@re yadi eka sfoka haya
eka dose saba alankara haya ksaya
SYNONYMS
dasa alankare—with ten instances of literary ornamentation; yad/—if; eka—one;
sloka—verse; haya—there is; eka dose—by one fault; saba—all; alafAkdra—ornaments;
haya ksaya—become null and void.
TRANSLATION
“If there are ten literary ornaments in a verse but even one faulty expression, the
entire verse is nullified.
TEXT 70
HA AT CAG SAT SPAS |
OF CHSETS CATE Fae Fae 190 u
sundara Sarira yaiche bhisane bhisita
eka Sveta-kusthe yaiche karaye vigita
SYNONYMS
sundara—bdeautiful; sarira—body; yaiche—as; bhasane—with ornaments; bhusita-
decorated; eka—one; sveta-kusthe—with a white spot of leprosy; yafche—as; karaye
—is made; vigita—abominable.
